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In which I am self-pitying

Do not click:

I suck, my writing sucks, everything sucks, and I understand why no one will ever want to read the suckiness that is my sucky work.

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rahirah
Mar. 13th, 2006 06:28 pm (UTC)
No, you don't.

You have a good story with a definite buildup, climax, and conclusion. It's a huge improvement over your last try; it doesn't ramble around and have the secondary characters take over the way the Raif novel did. It could definitely use tightening, but the cuts I suggested are "tightening the existing story" cuts, not "scrap this and start over" cuts. The problems it has are eminently fixable.

Also, macha thinks your suggestion re: Angel and Faith was nifty, and we're going to use it. So there. *g*
wildrider
Mar. 14th, 2006 01:03 am (UTC)
So what part of "do not click" do some folks fail to grasp? :-D

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